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Something unreal
Contributed by
PhantomVampyress
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Thursday, 4th December 2003 @ 03:11:48 AM in AEST
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I dreampt of you
you wished for me
I beg you to stay
you threw me away
I loved you even more
you loved me less and less
I let you totally in
you shut me totally out
My heart ached
you pushed me harder to make
my fragile heart break
I opened all the windows of my soul
to let you fill them with yourself
you shattered it and made it black
I loved you so
you made me go
I gave it my all
you watched me fall
I loved you in vain
and I'm the only one in pain
JENNA
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PhantomVampyress
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2003-12-04 03:11:48]
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Re: Something unreal
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by keilajo on
Thursday, 4th December 2003 @ 05:25:34 AM AEST
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| great write. |
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Re: Something unreal
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by Vitreous_Soul on
Thursday, 4th December 2003 @ 06:08:29 AM AEST
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| I like this poem. Sorry you had to feel that way, as it is a very messed up ordeal to endure. I hope the pain subsides. |
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Re: Something unreal
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by fairyfloss on
Thursday, 4th December 2003 @ 06:12:37 AM AEST
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| Great poem, youve described your emotions and how your feeling really well. I hope youve been able to move on since you wrote the poem :) |
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Re: Something unreal
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by saddarkgirlreingsthenight on
Thursday, 4th December 2003 @ 03:09:31 PM AEST
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this is a really cool poem,
sorry u have gone through this pain but i know how ya feel,
maybe not exactly cause everybodies different,
but i've been there |
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Re: Something unreal
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by bobotheclown on
Thursday, 4th December 2003 @ 08:25:55 PM AEST
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sounds like u just got rejected thats the story of my life. If ever u need to talk to me feel free to PM me or w/e. Yeah good poem by the way.
Bobo (Joel) |
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Re: Something unreal
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by ladyfawn on
Monday, 8th December 2003 @ 01:52:15 AM AEST
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| this is so excellent, heartwrenching, i have a friend who is going through this at the moment and my heart goes out to you both:) hugs n' love nessa |
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