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Defenseless
Contributed by
PhantomVampyress
on
Thursday, 4th December 2003 @ 03:08:40 AM in AEST
Topic:
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I'm sitting on my bedroom floor
all I can see in the mirror is that
ugly dirty whore
I'm used out
I'm burned dry
my heart died
my soul still cries
I ache to be loved
I yearn to have efforts of love not in vain
My heart is scarred
My mind is poisioned
I can't get up
you pushed me down
I sit her defensless as you watch
me die!
JENNA
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2003-12-04 03:08:40]
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Re: Defenseless
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by keilajo on
Thursday, 4th December 2003 @ 05:24:38 AM AEST
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Your poems are well written, but I hate to see you so hard on yourself. I can feel the love and anger in this poem. The love you once had and the anger you now hold. I hope you find what you are looking for.
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Re: Defenseless
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by saddarkgirlreingsthenight on
Thursday, 4th December 2003 @ 03:14:42 PM AEST
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i love this.
this is a really good rite,
i hope 2 see more from u |
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Re: Defenseless
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by bobotheclown on
Thursday, 4th December 2003 @ 07:51:09 PM AEST
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Reminds me of a song by Scars of Life called Watch me Drown very good poem. I love the emotion u convey.
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