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Hate all of this
Contributed by
PhantomVampyress
on
Thursday, 4th December 2003 @ 03:05:52 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Hate so much
your eyes turn
gray with lust
Your heart inside stones
Your soul is crushed bones
You cannot think
You do not feel
that true love is definatley real
JENNA
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PhantomVampyress
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2003-12-04 03:05:52] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Hate all of this
(User Rating: 1 ) by keilajo on
Thursday, 4th December 2003 @ 05:21:50 AM AEST (User
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I would hate to know this person! One who doesnt know love. Well written.
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Re: Hate all of this
(User Rating: 1 ) by bobotheclown on
Thursday, 4th December 2003 @ 07:47:41 PM AEST (User
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this was really good, but should have been longer I loved the imagery of someones eyes being grey with lust and true love is NOT real, but thats only my twisted belief.
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Re: Hate all of this
(User Rating: 1 ) by Clintlover21 on
Friday, 23rd April 2004 @ 09:59:37 PM AEST (User
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I really can see what you mean so i could understand!!
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