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Crash
Contributed by
bopeep
on
Thursday, 4th December 2003 @ 01:08:59 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Vroom vroom goes the car as it speeds away.
Chu chu goes the train along its way.
Honk honk goes the car as it tries to stop.
As it clashes in this world.
And for a short moment there is silence.
Not one sound is heard and everything stands still.
You see ur life in front of you.
Slowly fading into darkness.
Suddenly screams and yells of agony fill your head.
"If only you could turn back time," you say.
"You'd do it all the right way," you say.
"A dollar short a day late," some say.
"What a crime..." some say.
"..they took his life away"
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bopeep
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2003-12-04 01:08:59]
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Re: Crash
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by bobotheclown on
Thursday, 4th December 2003 @ 01:12:06 AM AEST
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i don't get it but its still good and I'm glad you didn't wait to post this for 2 yrs because then it would be forgotten under dust and porn magazines a nd we would be oblivious to its cries to be read...
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Re: Crash
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 5th December 2003 @ 05:40:43 PM AEST
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| hey its merit. intresting concept you gots goin on in here. is their any significance to you? |
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