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Sit and Listen
Contributed by
bopeep
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Thursday, 4th December 2003 @ 12:22:47 AM in AEST
Topic:
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You walk around staring at the ground
You wish you could dissappear...
You wish u were not here.
You think that by staying quiet,
your problems will cease.
You think that by staying quiet,
no one will notice you exist.
You think that by staying quiet,
we will not notice your pain.
You walk around with a glare in your eyes.
You think it can all be hidden with lies.
You think that just by wishing it will die.
You send your pain to me.
Claiming I don't care.
You make me feel like *****,
And tell me you don't care.
You expect me to sit and listen,
As you tell me all about your day.
You expect me to sit and listen,
As I doubt i have the strenght to live another day.
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bopeep
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2003-12-04 00:22:47]
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Re: Sit and Listen
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by bobotheclown on
Thursday, 4th December 2003 @ 01:08:21 AM AEST
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The last line made me raise my eyebrows a very strong poem very well done!
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Re: Sit and Listen
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by JPMcMillan on
Thursday, 4th December 2003 @ 01:14:08 AM AEST
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The line "You think that just by wishing it will die." is amazing. You know in your heart that some of the bad is never going away, but you feel that maybe if you show a little of that misguided and very ordinary hope, that everything might work out.
Thanks, it's great.
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Re: Sit and Listen
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 5th December 2003 @ 05:41:56 PM AEST
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Re: Sit and Listen
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by NikkiMNelson on
Monday, 8th December 2003 @ 07:32:21 PM AEST
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VERY BEAUTIFUL!! it was a graet awesomely done poem!!
~*~Nikki~*~ |
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