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The Letter
Contributed by
juliETTE
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Thursday, 4th December 2003 @ 12:13:03 AM in AEST
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(There’s a message on the door
I should leave it but curiosity drives me-
So I read your words….)
Girl, I know you are so far gone from me,
And a wise man would set you free,
But he ain’t me-
You were the first thing in my life I ever loved,
Seemed you were sent from straight above,
To rescue me from my life-
And I know you tried, and you cried too many tears,
Wasted many a year, and still I left you here- alone.
If I could take back yesterday, I wouldn’t throw you away,
I ‘d make you proud to hear me say that I still love you,
Remember I always do.
(And I follow with my own words-
always against my better judgement….)
Boy, you know the score, I will never love another more
Than I loved you- when I loved you.
But this time you hurt more than just my heart
I can’t put myself out there where you are
So I just deal with us being apart.
All the things you’ve broken-
You can’t put us back together
But I promised you forever
One of us meant those words.
And if I could take back yesterday, I would lock you away,
Where I could still hold you everyday,
Where I was free to love you-
Remember I always do.
Copyright ©
juliETTE
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2003-12-04 00:13:03]
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Re: The Letter
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by Three_Blind_Mice on
Thursday, 4th December 2003 @ 12:32:04 AM AEST
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Thank you for your comment on my poem. This is wondeful! The talent level here is amazing and humbling.
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Re: The Letter
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by Daniela_Maria_Violin on
Thursday, 4th December 2003 @ 09:14:13 AM AEST
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| This is beautiful... I can relate! |
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Re: The Letter
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by harshreality on
Saturday, 6th December 2003 @ 01:26:30 AM AEST
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| BEAUTIFUL. I love everything I' ve read of yours so far. You are very talented. |
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Re: The Letter
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by NikkiMNelson on
Monday, 8th December 2003 @ 07:30:10 PM AEST
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Very beautiful.
Wonderful.
~*~Nikki~*~
GOOD WRITE |
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