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8 Track
Contributed by
JPMcMillan
on
Wednesday, 3rd December 2003 @ 11:54:30 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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True love flickers, but rarely fades,
She twice drew heart, but never spades.
She'll wax for me, at a private sunset,
Then tell me it's fine, when my entity is wet.
She'll live the dream, truly wild,
I'll fit in her sequence, as long as I'm mild.
The walls were dented, from something else,
A fading health, that surrounds myself.
And, when the acid, washes my brain,
She'll love me the most, maybe she's insane.
Copyright ©
JPMcMillan
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2003-12-03 23:54:30]
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Re: 8 Track
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by juliette on
Thursday, 4th December 2003 @ 12:16:07 AM AEST
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I absolutely love this! I don't even knoe what else to say. I think I'll have to read it again to get the full effect - but it's good,good,good! Thanks for sharing!
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Re: 8 Track
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by Three_Blind_Mice on
Thursday, 4th December 2003 @ 12:52:34 AM AEST
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Thanks for your comment on my poem, I liked the from one drunk to another remark. lol I can see you writing these words over a shot of Jack. Great work
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Re: 8 Track
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by keilajo on
Thursday, 4th December 2003 @ 05:32:47 AM AEST
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My I love this one too!
You have a very wonderful way with words....
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Re: 8 Track
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by LovingWhispers on
Thursday, 4th December 2003 @ 09:02:21 AM AEST
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ok..im affected!! This is outstanding.Something yum about it lol..
Hey!! Whats all this partying..are we all invited??? *wink*
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Re: 8 Track
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by NikkiMNelson on
Monday, 8th December 2003 @ 07:28:05 PM AEST
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Awesome poem!!...you have great talent!!!
Write more.
~*~Nikki~*~
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