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The breath of death

Contributed by driping_blood on Wednesday, 3rd December 2003 @ 11:45:02 PM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry

I am allown and no one to care
the world is hard and cruel
but you get use to the pain
like thorns stabbing every
inch of your body

The pain always has a end
but the end takes so long
many end it their selves

I try and try but to no prevail
the pain won't end it just gets harder

I am all allown and no one cares
they just stare watching me squirm
and wonder why I hurt so

They don't get it I want to tack one
just one show hem how it feels
stab hem and watch blood drip
Listen why he scream in horror
watch hem squirm for life
and wonder why dose he hold on
it's so easy to give up

But you use to the pain
and most don't like the
change but I will open
their eyes to the wonder
of change

Copyright © driping_blood ... [ 2003-12-03 23:45:02]
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Re: The breath of death (User Rating: 1 )
by Medieval_Enigma on Wednesday, 3rd December 2003 @ 11:52:44 PM AEST
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Hey boo david your poems keep getting better lol! I like this one..!!!!

~LuCy~

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