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Unanswered Prayers
Contributed by
Demon
on
Tuesday, 27th August 2002 @ 08:28:32 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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"I tried to take my life" he said
He showed his cut up wrist
They laughed and giggled
"What a shame you missed"
"Attempt number 3?" one said
"Some things never change"
"This attempt is like your first"
"They are all the same"
"Maybe try an overdose?"
"Or jump from a great height"
"Thankyou for your advice" he said
"Next time i'll do it right"
"Try to go a little deeper"
"Try sharpening the blade"
"Don't be scared now Jimmy"
"Your graves already made"
"This sad life of yours"
"Has gone on way too long"
"Such a useless life on earth"
"Here,does not belong"
"Go back where u came from"
"Get a refund,life returned"
"A life of pain and suffering"
"Is what a boy like you as earned"
"We didnt know he meant it"
"His cry for help,unheard"
"Now we pay the price and wish.."
"We could take back every word"
"He sleeps in peace forever"
"His journey of pain has ended"
"Never to be forgotten but instead..."
"Always remembered"
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Demon
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2002-08-27 20:28:32] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Unanswered Prayers
(User Rating: 1 ) by lil_angel on
Wednesday, 28th August 2002 @ 01:20:54 AM AEST (User
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A good write, and i am sure he forgives you. |
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Re: Unanswered Prayers
(User Rating: 1 ) by Poetess730 on
Saturday, 7th September 2002 @ 03:47:58 AM AEST (User
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again.. wow.. very deep and powerful words.. i'm very impressed |
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