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When It'll Last
Contributed by
Eve
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Wednesday, 3rd December 2003 @ 06:22:17 PM in AEST
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When dew kisses the roses,
And the sun comes to stay,
Remember that it loses
Its vigilant beauty after the day.
When you think it'll last forever,
And everything will be well,
Remember your every endeavor
Where you inevitably fell.
When everything seems to come together,
And you're sure your troubles will end,
Remember the days in the nether
When time failed to mend.
When you think you're being told lies,
And you merely can't believe,
Remember I'm not asking you why
Just warning you what the world conceives.
And that when dew kisses the roses,
And the sun comes to stay,
Remember that it loses
Its vigilant beauty after the day.
Copyright ©
Eve
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2003-12-03 18:22:17]
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Re: When It'll Last
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by Vitreous_Soul on
Thursday, 4th December 2003 @ 02:49:54 AM AEST
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Oh my god, that's beautiful. If your goal is to make people cry, then you have done it. Your talent truly has no limit.
Truly a masterpiece, i'll read it many times over.
Keep writing (...or die/else),
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Re: When It'll Last
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 4th December 2003 @ 06:36:02 AM AEST
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Another read, another comment. I am hooked!
Keep writing (..or there will be consequences)
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Re: When It'll Last
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by ladyfawn on
Friday, 5th December 2003 @ 05:33:15 PM AEST
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| beautiful:) hugs n' love nessa |
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