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Souless Eyes & Weakening Ties
Contributed by
Bruce-Lee
on
Wednesday, 3rd December 2003 @ 05:59:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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"I cannot look at you any longer,
Your pale face knows not wrong from right,
Nor right from wrong.
You stand there singing that same old song.
I cannot have you any longer.
I cannot take your stream of lies,
I cannot wake from your seemless eyes,
I cannot breathe your dead air,
I cannot hold your brittled hair.
You're not the same.
You've changed on me.
You're gone, but still talkin,
Nothin but a deadmanwalkin.
But I cannot look the other way, I cannot stray.
I am bounded to this cancerous sigh.
It is my day, my dawn to dusk.
Listening to your fallacious lies,
Your deceit, your ties,
To darkness and greed,
Your souless feed,
On my forgiveness and loving,
Which you strip with such demonic speed.
It wont be long till you hear the Tell-Tale Heart.
Guilty beats of your lifeless core.
Like a seed implanted in your mind,
It'll begin to grow and spread,
A viral disease in your head.
I just hope this nightmare ends,
So we can get back to being friends."
Copyright ©
Bruce-Lee
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2003-12-03 17:59:00]
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Re: Souless Eyes & Weakening Ties
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by Jellybellyprincess on
Wednesday, 3rd December 2003 @ 06:06:09 PM AEST
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UGH! People with no concience bother me too! They're so intolerable..... Great poem, it's really described well. Or described really well.... either way you say it, I don't know..... any ways.... right, the description--- the way you present the situation through words is breathtaking. "I cannot breathe your dead air". That's just brilliant.....
Awesome job =)
God bless,
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Re: Souless Eyes & Weakening Ties
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by Ilhar on
Wednesday, 3rd December 2003 @ 07:32:37 PM AEST
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well written
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