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Happy
Contributed by
blugurl6
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Tuesday, 27th August 2002 @ 08:24:46 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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Last night I was so happy
I spended all day with you
And by the size of your beautiful smile
I'd say you were happy too
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Re: Happy
(User Rating: 1 ) by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Wednesday, 28th August 2002 @ 01:29:28 AM AEST (User
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Blugurl, this is a beautiful verse.... you should try expanding on it.....(oh..and 'spended' should be 'spent'.
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Re: Happy
(User Rating: 1 ) by BluGurl6 on
Wednesday, 28th August 2002 @ 09:41:36 AM AEST (User
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ohh..hee hee, thanks for telling me. i knew something was wrong with that, just i wasn't sure on what! thanks again. |
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