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Thus Wept the Statue
Contributed by
Vitreous_Soul
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Wednesday, 3rd December 2003 @ 06:22:24 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Midway the path you travel upon
Why you continue when not really sure
Perhaps this is the road to a cure
But at the end will it be gone
Prominent in front of your eyes
Majesty as moonlight catches a silhouette
Of something your vision had never met
The unbreakable releasing it's cries
Not but from the fury of God
Or the deepest of love, regret, and fears
Could summon eternal tears
And begin the crumbling of the stone facade
Across the sky the swirling rue had crept
This was the eve that the statue had wept
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Re: Thus Wept the Statue
(User Rating: 1 ) by Eve on
Wednesday, 3rd December 2003 @ 09:55:37 PM AEST (User
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Beautiful. If that's not a song, it'd be an amazing one.
Keep writing (or else/die),
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Re: Thus Wept the Statue
(User Rating: 1 ) by lovingcritters on
Thursday, 4th December 2003 @ 12:58:22 PM AEST (User
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Well, VS, I tell you the truth....this one gave me goosebumps....and that simply does not happen with me. It's imagery was spectacular.. and when a statue....who has been stone for so many years...begins to cry...that in it's self is enough to give anyone the chills...
Roses again, my friend...don't stop writing....they are coming in loud and clear..so is your heart!
Love and warm hugs in the snow it's snowing here today in Wyoming
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Re: Thus Wept the Statue
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Monday, 26th April 2004 @ 02:49:16 PM AEST (User
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Ahaha! what have we here? I do enjoy journeying through your poetic glade now and again, as I perchance across startling things such as this.
"Of something your vision had never met
The unbreakable releasing it's cries"
That was an image and a half.
Excellent. |
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