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The child inside
Contributed by
PumpkinPie
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Wednesday, 3rd December 2003 @ 01:42:26 AM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
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She runs to me with a sunny face
Enlightened are the rest of her days
Children's toys and love ahoy!
Are all reserved for this little boy
He smiles and giggles inside her heart
She says he'll be kind and oh-so smart
He'll be a caring doctor,perfect father,attentive teacher,endearing hedonist
Nothing about him will be amiss
He'll change the world,bring peace to man
To those less fortunate he'll give his hand..
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In a split second,her dreams all sheer
Her felicity becomes nothing but austere
Her heartbeat seeks nothing but his
All his little stirrings she can reminisce
She looks outside the window and gazes
And thinks about all of life's unexpected phases
Snow falls from the sky,an unflawed,perfect snowflake on the glass appears
She looks at me and says: "He's now my cherished little angel" through her yearning tears
I learned today that my friend lost her baby,so in a way this is dedicated to her and all mothers who have lost a child.~God bless~
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PumpkinPie
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Re: The child inside
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by ArdRi79 on
Wednesday, 3rd December 2003 @ 08:40:07 AM AEST
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| that is so sad and its well written too, well done. |
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Re: The child inside
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by LOWMAN613 on
Wednesday, 3rd December 2003 @ 11:19:42 PM AEST
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With me being 6 months preg. this really got to me hard,We think about stuff like this but never figure it would happen,how sad!
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Re: The child inside
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by Zee on
Saturday, 6th December 2003 @ 04:21:17 PM AEST
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This is really sad!! My deepest sympathies with his parents!! Very nicely expressed!!
Zee |
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Re: The child inside
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by WordPoet on
Friday, 16th January 2004 @ 01:11:32 PM AEST
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It is poetry like this that makes us pause and re-evaluate the priorities in life, realize that which is most valuable and cherish our moments instead of squandering them.
With two children of my own and all the dreams I hold for them, this is a quiet reminder of how fragile and tender these things can be.
nice write. |
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Re: The child inside
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by emystar on
Monday, 26th January 2004 @ 06:44:50 AM AEST
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This a very fine tribute to someone that's lost a child. I'm sure it will be cherished.
luv, huggs,
emy
U r a good friend. |
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Re: The child inside
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by Jazz on
Tuesday, 3rd February 2004 @ 11:16:34 PM AEST
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A beautiful poem, with a powerful message. You have a way with words...
Jazz |
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Re: The child inside
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by emystar on
Sunday, 8th February 2004 @ 07:14:28 PM AEST
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Sorry for the lose.
I'm sure she will cherish this.
Take care of yourself, please.
luv, huggs,
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Re: The child inside
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by Kristina_Simpson_Stewart on
Thursday, 11th March 2004 @ 12:16:23 PM AEST
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Pumpkin that is so beautiful. Thank you for sharing this poem with us. You truly captured the sadness of a mother that has lost her child, speaking from experience. Keep up the great work! Such a beautiful piece.
Kristina |
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Re: The child inside
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by Stitch on
Thursday, 8th April 2004 @ 09:53:53 PM AEST
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Pieces of this just cried out to me. What a heartfelt write. You are talented, Pumpkin.
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Re: The child inside
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by Spazzo on
Tuesday, 4th January 2005 @ 09:54:10 PM AEST
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This is so sad. But written well.
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Re: The child inside
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by moon_light on
Tuesday, 3rd May 2005 @ 09:53:33 AM AEST
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| this one truly tuches my hert. good wright |
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Re: The child inside
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 23rd September 2005 @ 04:26:24 AM AEST
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Wow! What another awesome write by you.
Started out so happy and then that sudden twist. Talk about gut wrencing emotion. This poem made me smile and then tear up in shock because it seem to flow soooo well, I was just reading right through and whoa! Didn't see that coming. Heavy hitting. Full of emotion. You have an incredible expert way with words that's....so amazing. Puimpkin.
Thank you for sharing.
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