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the eyes of a child
Contributed by
driping_blood
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Tuesday, 2nd December 2003 @ 10:48:51 PM in AEST
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Have you ever been beat
Just because you were there
And he had to much to drink
No excuse but we can find one later
The house is trashed and now he’s mad
He just did it but it’s still your fault
He doesn’t care he’s not the one how
Will remember all this in the morning
He said sorry again it gets old
You want him to kill you that
Way he mite truly be sorry for once
Or maybe you could kill him
Then he would get whats coming
But you’re still smart just 10
Maybe if you make it to 17
That’s it he will get it thin
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Re: the eyes of a child
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by Medieval_Enigma on
Tuesday, 2nd December 2003 @ 11:00:16 PM AEST
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Whatever! Damn you where right ur poem totally sucks! j/k It's good , finally you wrote about something...I still wanna see your other poems mmkay. Boo Hoo....Well ttyl ..
~LuCy~ |
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Re: the eyes of a child
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by Cobalt on
Tuesday, 2nd December 2003 @ 11:39:40 PM AEST
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Now this is something I can totally relate to.........
I liked it though.. |
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Re: the eyes of a child
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by hardcoreputa on
Wednesday, 3rd December 2003 @ 12:29:39 AM AEST
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| i know exactly what your going through, except that mine was never drunk.... filled with emotions that speak truth and make it beautiful. i look forward to reading more of your poetry, you have a lot to say. ~Apryl |
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Re: the eyes of a child
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by CrystalSilence on
Wednesday, 3rd December 2003 @ 01:05:02 AM AEST
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"Have you ever been beat
Just because you were there"
Such painful lines...makes me wanna buy a ticket and kick his lily white!!!
His day will come..and it will be in the vicinity of ten fold.
I dont hear a mention of anyone there for you..that saddens me more.You are in my thoughts
Excellently expressed...Keep em coming. *smiles*
CS |
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Re: the eyes of a child
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 3rd December 2003 @ 01:53:50 AM AEST
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omg. for years now I have thought the same thing. i am older now and dont have the blunt of it as much anymore, but my ten year old sister just told me the same thing. "But you’re still smart just 10 Maybe if you make it to 17 That’s it he will get it thin" all I want is a house away from him where I can take the three youngest and raise them happy.
Great write. shows alot of thought.
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Re: the eyes of a child
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by gery_giggles on
Wednesday, 3rd December 2003 @ 06:23:14 PM AEST
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i know this all to well,i live it all to well.......great write!
luv always |
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