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Upon The Breeze
Contributed by
LovingWhispers
on
Tuesday, 2nd December 2003 @ 08:08:19 PM in AEST
Topic:
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A breeze blew in and covered me,with reminders of the past
A time when things were savoured,for I knew they couldnt last
Memories of yesterdays,when I'd once stood in the light
Of your sunshine in the mornings,oppositional to my nights
Here you come again,you stopped by for just a while
And blessed me with reminders,of a new found inner smile
My eyes did not believe,that my friend of days gone by
Had blew in like a breeze,and left me with a high
Happy here within,for the presence of your way
Always made me laugh and sometimes had me stray
Nothing like a memory to come calling at my door
Thank you for the visit,I hope to see you more
Copyright ©
LovingWhispers
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2003-12-02 20:08:19]
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Re: Upon The Breeze
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by Ilhar on
Tuesday, 2nd December 2003 @ 08:33:11 PM AEST
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lovely
Shari |
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Re: Upon The Breeze
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by secretwind on
Tuesday, 2nd December 2003 @ 09:03:00 PM AEST
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i like this feel good write,sometimes seeing old friends can be very trying,but your encounter was a very pleasant one...tha's sweet.
The Wind...... |
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Re: Upon The Breeze
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Tuesday, 2nd December 2003 @ 11:11:58 PM AEST
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Precious!!!!
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Jenni |
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Re: Upon The Breeze
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by hazelnut on
Tuesday, 2nd December 2003 @ 11:18:10 PM AEST
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breezy
light yet weighed with emotion |
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Re: Upon The Breeze
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by Cobalt on
Tuesday, 2nd December 2003 @ 11:52:36 PM AEST
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| Nice write hon. I enjoyed it and know the feeling... It is nice. |
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Re: Upon The Breeze
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by LovingWhispers on
Tuesday, 2nd December 2003 @ 11:57:35 PM AEST
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"blew" is meant to be "blown"..I think!!! lol *blushes* then thinks oh..who cares *pokes out tongue*
LW |
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Re: Upon The Breeze
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by ladyfawn on
Wednesday, 3rd December 2003 @ 04:38:01 AM AEST
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| make new friends but keep the old, for one is silver and the other is gold, hugs n' love nessa |
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