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Glass Eyes
Contributed by
Exodus-On-Life
on
Tuesday, 2nd December 2003 @ 03:04:44 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Passing your coarse judgement
Didn't even look twice
Waiting forever to gaze at you
Oh, crushing me must be so nice
Shaking from the freezing cold
Dreaming of me wanting something else
Taken from my plans for revenge
Can't get away from you and I can't get away from myself
Driving away from apologies
And crashing into everything
Ruling out the sorrow
I'm emptying my mind
Smoke rises with the window sill
Glass breaking right in my eyes
Close them too slowly
Left here squinting, watching as my heart dies
Dragging my body through tomorrow
Sleepless and taking my time
Planning on starting another day
Finding what it is thats mine
I've got so many things to say
I'm sick and tired of trying
Take me away and slaughter what's left
Wishing, hoping, then dying
Examples that should make me
End up cracking skulls
The knife you slit my throat with
Never ever dulls
Red spots spreading
Cotton soaks crimson and wet
Ruins another shirt of mine
And still, you always forget
Taken my life with another day
Ruling out the sorrow that finds
Breaking this sadness that holds me
And these unbreakable chains that bind
Breaking down over nothing
You spread through the marrow
Break my bones and destroy my heart
Harder breathing, lungs so narrow
Never giving anything
As I'm never giving up
Fill me up with your torment
Fill my cup
Submitting to my feelings
And my eyes are tired of this glass
Seeing red from this shirt
And holding on to my past
Passing this coarse judgement
You can mix it with my tears
Lock me in a dungeon
Secured with all my fears
Jumping straight through this
Forgetting I ever felt
Run away from the pain I feel
The same pain you loved and dealt
Forget my past in the bottles
Littered across my floor
Swallow all these memories
Wait a while, and show you the door
Waiting is old again
And I'm losing sense of all I gained
My head is killing me now
And my glass-filled eyes are extremely pained
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Re: Glass Eyes
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by mystical_illusion on
Tuesday, 2nd December 2003 @ 05:58:38 PM AEST
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Wow, dont know what to say. Very good write. It gets better with every line
Really liked it.
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Re: Glass Eyes
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by CrystalSilence on
Tuesday, 2nd December 2003 @ 06:32:40 PM AEST
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WOW O WOW!!
Excellent write!
So much emotion and pain..you expressed yourself so well!
Be good to yourself..things will pass ;)
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Re: Glass Eyes
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by saddarkgirlreingsthenight on
Wednesday, 3rd December 2003 @ 08:24:21 PM AEST
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| i love this, its just so breathtaking. i don't know what to say |
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