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First
Contributed by
jonteD
on
Tuesday, 2nd December 2003 @ 12:56:46 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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First suit,
Perfect fit,
Modern look,
Off the peg.
First job,
New challenge,
Shy demeanour,
Not yet boring.
First drink,
Initially happy,
Non stop talk,
Then not so well.
First car,
Fast, gleaming,
Proud, loud,
Cheap but expensive.
First loss,
Relative gone,
Everyone's crying,
Feeling older.
First kiss,
Eyes closed,
Moving nearer,
Oh what a tingle.
Copyright ©
jonteD
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2003-12-02 12:56:46]
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Re: First
(User Rating: 1 )
by ArdRi79 on
Tuesday, 2nd December 2003 @ 01:17:12 PM AEST
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| this si a very good poem, I like the way it weaves words and imagery to get your point across so well |
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Re: First
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Monday, 8th December 2003 @ 07:18:01 AM AEST
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Dunno how I missed this...and even after you mentioned it... You have nothing to apologise for, Silly...this style works... Have a great day, my friend...
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