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Inside
Contributed by
KrysteRayne
on
Tuesday, 2nd December 2003 @ 02:28:03 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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It hits you big in the chest
the pain, the suffering
and all the rest
it never ends
it twists
it bends
increases
decraeses
it its always there
no matter how small
don't matter how short
don't matter how tall
not wide or thin
the burning hole
is always within
Copyright ©
KrysteRayne
... [
2003-12-02 02:28:03]
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Re: Inside
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by Katie-Kate on
Tuesday, 2nd December 2003 @ 03:22:58 AM AEST
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| great write - hard hitting - nice |
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Re: Inside
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 2nd December 2003 @ 10:31:11 PM AEST
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Nice
job
keep
it
up! |
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Re: Inside
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by callistonynaeve on
Sunday, 7th December 2003 @ 03:42:29 PM AEST
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| I love this. Very emotional but justified i supose |
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Re: Inside
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by Rakerman1999 on
Saturday, 20th December 2003 @ 12:44:50 AM AEST
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I found this to be quite a profound write. You agony is clear .
Well done!
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