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Her Mind Game
Contributed by
KittyJade
on
Monday, 1st December 2003 @ 08:51:23 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Don’t eat or drink,
Don’t even blink.
You know the rules,
Or so you think.
Your head was clear,
But now a flood.
She’s in your mind,
She’s in your blood.
She’s at you back,
Don’t turn around.
She won’t give up,
Until you’ve drowned.
Can’t you see?
Don’t be so blind.
She plays the game,
She’s in your mind.
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KittyJade
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2003-12-01 20:51:23]
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Re: Her Mind Game
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by Self_Vigilant on
Monday, 1st December 2003 @ 09:44:13 PM AEST
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Wow...
What an insite you have!
It really seems as if you know this person, is he/she fictional?
And what i find most interesting is that you wrote the ''intruder'' in female form.
Schizophrenia is so under-discovered, and stems into many forms, that such a large amount of its victims are improperly diagnosed and treated.
An advanced view into such confusion deserves my applause.
WELL DONE!! |
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Re: Her Mind Game
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 1st December 2003 @ 10:26:13 PM AEST
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hey yeah i would just like to say i enjoyed reading that and i wonder when you will submit your next poem.
hope to see more of you. |
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Re: Her Mind Game
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by secretwind on
Tuesday, 2nd December 2003 @ 03:11:22 AM AEST
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YEAH I LIKE THIS...KINDA SPOOKY.
THE WIND... |
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Re: Her Mind Game
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 20th December 2003 @ 08:03:12 PM AEST
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yer so that girl... was she, like, in you?
lol is that a dumb question?
byyeeeee |
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