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Atop the Hilltop
Contributed by
RealmX
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Monday, 1st December 2003 @ 08:16:52 PM in AEST
Topic:
NaturePoetry
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Atop this hill I sit
The wind rippling through my clothes
Gently bristling the blades of grass
A constant tapestry of moving thread
Peace comes over me
Could it be this breeze?
Could it be nature?
Or knowing that I don't have to be anywhere?
Planes fly over me
I'm waiting for one to land...
Where's my plane at?
Have it wait for me...I'm not ready to leave yet
This wind is now stabbing me
Breaking me
My skin is numbing over
Cold
Oh, but if I was but a bird
So I could see it like they do
Fly free, behind by nothing
Where could I go?
I'd see this whole world...
Innocent and unabated
See this hilltop
Where I sit, on this calm autumnal day
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Re: Atop the Hilltop
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by RICHARD_CAMPBELL on
Monday, 1st December 2003 @ 08:24:51 PM AEST
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HI,REALMX,
YOU EXPRESS YOUR SELF AND YOUR LOVE OF NATURE REAL WELL IN THIS GOOD POEM.I JUST KNOW THAT YOU INJOY YOUR SELF. |
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Re: Atop the Hilltop
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by LovingWhispers on
Monday, 1st December 2003 @ 08:48:52 PM AEST
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Wonderful Imagery..I was right there with you.Gorgeous!!!
Sharon |
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Re: Atop the Hilltop
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by secretwind on
Tuesday, 2nd December 2003 @ 03:30:49 AM AEST
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WELL DONE.
THE WIND... |
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