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Still in love with you
Contributed by
echomywurdz
on
Monday, 1st December 2003 @ 06:23:16 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Its been quite a while now,
Lots of things have changed
Another family member has died
which put me through great pain
Well since lots of things have went wrong,
And lots of loved ones are now gone
I guess theres nothing i could do,
Except to try and move on and make it through
But you know its hard for me
And all i can do is smile and pretend to move on happily
And its hard to explain how i feel
When everything to me is so unreal
The way you look...
The way you feel...
This must be a vision,
It cant be real
I wish i oculd say that it was
But i know its not because your below or above
Well maybe if my life was through
Then i could be with you
But theres someone here who loves me now,
And personally i dont see how
I guess i can say i like him to,
But im still in love with you
I wish i knew what to do,
Could i love you still and love him to?
But then again that wouldnt be right
I wouldnt be able to sleep at night
So until i know what to do
Ill just sit here and think of the one whos loves me,
and the one who use to...
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echomywurdz
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2003-12-01 18:23:16]
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Re: Still in love with you
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by RealmX on
Monday, 1st December 2003 @ 07:00:29 PM AEST
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| I sense that a lot of emotion was put into this poem. It stirs up a lot on the inside, be happy for who you have now, you never know when they'll depart from you, is one thought that pops into my head. I like this poem, and I hope that you write others like it! |
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Re: Still in love with you
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by LovingWhispers on
Monday, 1st December 2003 @ 09:10:39 PM AEST
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Excellent write!!
You are in a hard place at the moment,but think what he would want for you ...look inside and know what you want for yourself.A lifetime of missing,or a lifetime of more love. *smiles*
Hope things turn a little for you.
Sharon |
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Re: Still in love with you
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by Cobalt on
Tuesday, 2nd December 2003 @ 12:35:21 AM AEST
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| This was good. I think I fully grasped the emtion. So torn it seemd. |
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