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i want to rember
Contributed by
loopylou
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Monday, 1st December 2003 @ 04:37:55 PM in AEST
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i dont ever want to forget these days
i dont want to forget the way i laugth
or the way i continusly sobbed or cried when these people who were once specail walked out
with a few mutterd words of good bye
i never want to forget anyones faces
i want to memorise each and every expresion apon their complections
but i cant because the wind changes to fast
like the seasons
and i do so badly want my life to change
but i want to rember what once was everything
........i want to rember your name
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loopylou
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2003-12-01 16:37:55]
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Re: i want to rember
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Tuesday, 2nd December 2003 @ 06:20:02 AM AEST
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Good write, but your poem needs a spell-check.....
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Re: i want to rember
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by PumpkinPie on
Tuesday, 2nd December 2003 @ 05:18:38 PM AEST
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I actually cried a little here while reading your poems I feel the same why you do.As you,I want my life to change,start anew and fresh,but I keep hanging on in the past,scared that my loved ones will disappear and that I'll never be able to treasure moments like these again.I loved this poem,truly one of a kind,very simple yet touched my heart exactly on target.Well done,please continue posting,I would love to see more of your work.
PumpkinPie:) |
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