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A Bad Relationship
Contributed by
LiveTheDream
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Monday, 1st December 2003 @ 01:41:24 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Like broken glass
We don’t fit together
We clash like the glass
Crashing
Smashing
To the ground
No care is there between us
And every now and then
A war will break out
Again and again
The glass breaks
And the fire burns
Time after time
The thoughts run free
Like the wind in the storm
Blowing free
Of wild thoughts
Of hatred and jealousy
The ruins are spiked
Cut to a blade
Like the thoughts
Of anger and hate
Take your angry thoughts
And throw them away
Burn them in the fire
That hides in me
Again the war breaks out
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Re: A Bad Relationship
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by RochelleLloyd on
Sunday, 1st February 2004 @ 11:48:52 PM AEST
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| I've got one of these kind of relationships. Thanks for sharing. |
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Re: A Bad Relationship
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by harmoni on
Thursday, 5th February 2004 @ 01:33:20 PM AEST
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Very sad I understand cause I had been there .When you have done all you can .
Then it's time to get away . Good luck
on search.For there's always someone for someone. great poem |
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Re: A Bad Relationship
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by faithmairee on
Saturday, 28th February 2004 @ 12:20:53 PM AEST
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| a deep and well written poem...i liked this a lot. |
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Re: A Bad Relationship
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by Katie2008 on
Tuesday, 18th May 2004 @ 06:53:52 PM AEST
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| Nice work, I think a lot of people can relate to that. |
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Re: A Bad Relationship
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by JacobsKK on
Sunday, 3rd April 2005 @ 08:05:46 PM AEST
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| Thank you for sharing. I have also had a relationship like this. |
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Re: A Bad Relationship
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by xthrewmyluvawayx on
Tuesday, 2nd August 2005 @ 01:47:19 PM AEST
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| very good....i can relate in many ways....keep up the great work! |
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Re: A Bad Relationship
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 3rd September 2005 @ 03:33:48 PM AEST
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| a great write! I hoped this helped you and others realise how important strong and healthy friendships are |
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Re: A Bad Relationship
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by Butterflygirl40 on
Saturday, 7th January 2006 @ 02:12:14 AM AEST
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| nice poem i can relate to this poem^_^ |
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Re: A Bad Relationship
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by ElizabethLaura on
Monday, 9th January 2006 @ 05:10:32 PM AEST
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| I think a lot of people know how it feels to have a relationship like that with someone. Very nice write. Thanks for sharing your work with us. |
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Re: A Bad Relationship
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by snowflake on
Wednesday, 29th March 2006 @ 05:25:51 PM AEST
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| i can totally relate nice write |
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Re: A Bad Relationship
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by ravensofthedark on
Saturday, 4th November 2006 @ 10:13:13 PM AEST
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very odd, but a great poem none the less, it truely is trajic the way the words are put, but what are we ifn't we are doomed, cursed, and angry
~ The Raven |
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Re: A Bad Relationship
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by DeepaliDoshi on
Thursday, 4th January 2007 @ 03:21:12 AM AEST
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| we all think we are so nice and eay to get along with... but the truth is its not like that at all... what you have penned is the hard truth |
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Re: A Bad Relationship
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by UrMyInspiration on
Sunday, 21st January 2007 @ 04:38:53 PM AEST
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| My life story... Very nice writing. |
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Re: A Bad Relationship
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by inad on
Sunday, 1st April 2007 @ 01:09:21 AM AEST
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| This poem sounds like me and my first ever boyfriend. It explains us to the t. Its really great how you captured it all. |
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Re: A Bad Relationship
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by willwinuk on
Friday, 30th November 2007 @ 05:22:11 AM AEST
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| Very good, I really liked it. |
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Re: A Bad Relationship
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by GraveTypeBed on
Wednesday, 20th February 2008 @ 12:25:54 AM AEST
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| Very Dark... I Like :D |
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Re: A Bad Relationship
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by emmyb14 on
Thursday, 8th January 2009 @ 06:21:16 PM AEST
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| i reallyyyyy like the end line! |
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Re: A Bad Relationship
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by windowguy on
Wednesday, 13th May 2009 @ 11:43:06 PM AEST
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| All i can say is: "Ouch!" |
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Re: A Bad Relationship
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by vahtang on
Monday, 5th October 2009 @ 07:29:39 AM AEST
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Re: A Bad Relationship
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by PONYCAT on
Sunday, 18th October 2009 @ 09:49:10 PM AEST
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wow
sooo awsome
i wish i could write like this?
gimme a break... |
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Re: A Bad Relationship
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by b3nnehboi on
Tuesday, 13th April 2010 @ 11:22:41 AM AEST
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| Hmm works quite well :) |
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Re: A Bad Relationship
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by wynniemel on
Saturday, 25th September 2010 @ 08:23:48 AM AEST
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| Nice poem I felt angry as I read it ready to explode with fire and hatred! |
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Re: A Bad Relationship
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by 2bpositive on
Tuesday, 16th November 2010 @ 12:05:56 AM AEST
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A can relate
to your words I gravitate
so continue to show
and let those words flow.
Thumbs up!
2bpositive |
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Re: A Bad Relationship
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by soselfxconscious on
Tuesday, 28th December 2010 @ 10:01:36 PM AEST
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| I can definitely relate to this. Great job, very powerful. |
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Re: A Bad Relationship
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by Smithery on
Saturday, 26th March 2011 @ 07:22:46 AM AEST
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| those eyes once sparkled and will do again,
as the saying goes "it is better to have loved and lost than to never have loved at all"
Life is my canvas, pain is my brush.love is my colour, and she is my light xx |
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Re: A Bad Relationship
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by LauranHyde on
Saturday, 28th July 2012 @ 05:54:05 AM AEST
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| this is good. a great write, sorry your relationship wasn't successful. |
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