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Unaware Sociopath
Contributed by
SensitiveSoAbused
on
Monday, 1st December 2003 @ 12:19:36 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Unaware Sociopath
It seems that unintentionally I am hurting everybody,
I can not help doing so, so why can’t I just run away
And escape to a place where no one can see me,
Escape to a place where no one can touch me
I cower in this corner so you will be safe.
Cuz I’m an unaware sociopath.
At the blood on my fingers I laugh,
cuz instead of blood I see
the juice from a cherry,
and life is all peaches and cream.
My actions taken aren’t my own;
you’re only safe when I’m alone.
If you give me the chance then I’ll destroy you
smiling as I slit your throat.
As your blood flows I am justified,
my blood flows, my heart full of pride,
The havoc I have wreaked appears just fine to me.
Cuz I’m an unaware sociopath.
You better beware my wrath,
cuz I’m gonna rape you,
mutilate and misshape you,
uninhibited cuz I’m in a dream.
And so, I must run away, I’ll just go, I will leave today
and bring all of my pain with me.
Alone, in my agony I will moan, I’ll take it out on me
(the hatred I can’t redirect)
Cuz I’m an unaware sociopath,
held up by my self-piteous staff,
but I must enjoy it,
taking life to destroy it,
and sitting down to watch the aftermath
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SensitiveSoAbused
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2003-12-01 12:19:36] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Unaware Sociopath
(User Rating: 1 ) by tease_whizz on
Monday, 1st December 2003 @ 12:25:56 PM AEST (User
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i really enjoyed this - awesome imagery and a great flow to it, i would love to hear it to music. i've read through some of your other poems and just thought i'd say welcome to YPDC as i hadn't read your stuff before. you might enjoy some of my darker poetry. hope to read more from you soon. Kate x |
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Re: Unaware Sociopath
(User Rating: 0 ) by Former_Member on
Monday, 1st December 2003 @ 01:07:01 PM AEST (User
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i really liked your reference to peaches and cream, you have some great imagery going there too, keep it up. |
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Re: Unaware Sociopath
(User Rating: 1 ) by Wrybod on
Friday, 5th December 2003 @ 04:02:44 AM AEST (User
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Normally I don't read this sort of poetry but I'm glad I did for one reason only...........to appreciate your skill.
bob |
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Re: Unaware Sociopath
(User Rating: 1 ) by bobotheclown on
Monday, 8th December 2003 @ 01:38:15 PM AEST (User
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Never read this one before ssa. Good stuff. One part reminded me slightly of Swollen Members keep up the good stuff buddy.
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Re: Unaware Sociopath
(User Rating: 1 ) by SensitiveSoAbused on
Tuesday, 9th December 2003 @ 02:37:35 AM AEST (User
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Swollen Members? Don't insult me!
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Re: Unaware Sociopath
(User Rating: 1 ) by LEMMEN on
Monday, 13th December 2004 @ 08:12:27 PM AEST (User
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Good write.
~DENNIS~ |
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