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if humans could dance upside down
Contributed by
chrispywho
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Monday, 1st December 2003 @ 11:35:10 AM in AEST
Topic:
psychoticpoems
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take a wild guess, please
in some ways it frees, a
glory that feeds frustration, beautiful
relation to those who stand looking
I wish i could write, right away the wrong would write for self-help knowing its yelp of pain was better left in refrain the same membrane born to those who fly while you cry, is that why? only in drowning do kings go frowning to their girl, who's problems? is a curl to twirl is near your fear of never being the weird according to those who came near.
dont move you, materialistic self-centered twitch, i will drop you you *****, before im through with your new, love. if you call it that, in fact, the wrath of nearness will confess the rest of my test-ament of care, that is un-fair-un-aware, with invisble flare for my soul, is ready,
steady for you to bear.
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2003-12-01 11:35:10]
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Re: if humans could dance upside down
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by Putteragain on
Monday, 1st December 2003 @ 12:12:17 PM AEST
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ummmmmmm
dont know what to say but had to say something |
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Re: if humans could dance upside down
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by Cobalt on
Monday, 1st December 2003 @ 03:54:48 PM AEST
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| This was interesting but it would have gained power in poetry form me thinks. |
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