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I really do care
Contributed by
Bella_viola22
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Monday, 1st December 2003 @ 10:26:13 AM in AEST
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I tell myself over and over agine
That we couldn’t be anything but friends
And I push myself away when I see you
Your smile makes all the stress go away
Every pain I have is gone
I just can’t wait
To see you aging today
And I can’t stop myself from liking you
I know you have a girlfriend to
Seams more than perfect
And that you’ll probably never know I care
But when I see you get frustrated
Its like the world is coming down
I know just what to say
But I keep it inside
And it kills me everyday
To know you’ll never see the real me
cuz I close up so that I don’t have to be afraid
When you’re around me
I finally fell safe
And when the world to stop
When I was so scared
You came to me
And I was suddenly ok,
cuz I knew you wouldn’t let anything bad happen to me
I just wish some how you would know
I know you better that you think
I have just one wish
And that is for somehow
You to see
But I bet you’ll never know I like you
, How much I care
How much I just want you to be hear,
When everything just goes wrong
I want you to know that I really do care
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Bella_viola22
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2003-12-01 10:26:13]
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Re: I really do care
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by Wrybod on
Monday, 1st December 2003 @ 11:45:13 AM AEST
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I wish somebody felt that way about me. You sound like somebody everyone would like to know.
Is there no way you could contrive more time with this person.
Not every girlfriend I ever had was love at first sight.
You asked for comments and I've made them but there is one other thing that I hesitate to mention because you may think it is "knit picking" and doesn't matter. But here goes anyway. There are an awful lot of spelling mistakes! Do you want me to point them out?
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Re: I really do care
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by Bella_viola22 on
Thursday, 4th December 2003 @ 05:35:41 PM AEST
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| yes pleas do. My spellchecker dosent doa very good jod as u can tell. |
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Re: I really do care
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by NikkiMNelson on
Sunday, 7th December 2003 @ 07:18:37 PM AEST
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I thought it was very beautiful and i know exactly how you feel. There is someone i love who has no idea how i feel and also has a girl friend.
Wonderful Poem!
~*~Nikki~*~ |
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