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Wrong Room
Contributed by
crystalsilence
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Monday, 1st December 2003 @ 05:27:29 AM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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I walk into a room,where I have been so many times
I came with hope to see,friends I thought were mine
Yet they look at me as though I am a stranger in their space
Pass me over and do not notice tears upon my face
Before I had been held,and too I held them tight
Kept them ever present,in my thoughts both day and night
I look about the silence,that fills this shadowed room
And shed another tear,for the memories that loom
With my suitcase in my hand,and a sorrowed heart I turn
Guess I'll take the hint and from this lesson I will learn
That no matter who I think I know,or who proposes to know me
Rain can come in many forms,and tonight it falls on me
Copyright ©
crystalsilence
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2003-12-01 05:27:29]
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Re: Wrong Room
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Monday, 1st December 2003 @ 05:57:08 AM AEST
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Sad, but nicely done...
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Re: Wrong Room
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by LiveTheDream on
Monday, 1st December 2003 @ 06:47:05 AM AEST
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| Very sad...nicely expressed |
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Re: Wrong Room
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by ToriVeigh on
Monday, 1st December 2003 @ 07:12:33 AM AEST
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| Beautiful!! I hope you find a new room that will always feel welcoming to you. |
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Re: Wrong Room
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by Kie on
Monday, 1st December 2003 @ 08:15:32 AM AEST
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Although sad, this poem hit me straight in the heart.
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