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Melting Fascination
Contributed by
secretwind
on
Monday, 1st December 2003 @ 04:37:10 AM in AEST
Topic:
mystical
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TWISTING
ON THE WIND
IN FASCINATION AND IN A DAZE
MYSTERIES
EBB AND FLOW,
SOFTLY MOANING TO ME
THINGS I HAVE NEVER HEARD BEFORE.
EMOTIONS SWIRLING
SENSATIONS
ARE LIKE
ARE LIKE BEING ON A CAROUSEL,
DISTORTING VISIONS SO IT'S HARD TO TELL
WHEN I AH
I ENCOUNTER CREATURE FEATURES
IT'S NEVER CLEAR
WHAT I'M EXPERIENCING HERE.
UPON THE MADMAN WATERS I FLOW
A RIPPLE A WHISPER
FADING LIKE A GHOST,
DEEP INTO THE UNKNOWN
I'M
SLOWLY
MELTING
AND I LIKE IT.
Copyright ©
secretwind
... [
2003-12-01 04:37:10]
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Re: Melting Fascination
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by Kie on
Monday, 1st December 2003 @ 08:28:30 AM AEST
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I enjoyed reading your poem. I had a hard time deciphering what this poem was saying but the way you write gives the reader a feeling of deep soul searching emotion.
I liked it.
Kie |
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Re: Melting Fascination
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by emystar on
Monday, 16th February 2004 @ 07:04:54 PM AEST
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Very deep, thought provoking.
luv, huggs,
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Re: Melting Fascination
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by hauntedscorp on
Tuesday, 4th October 2005 @ 01:13:10 AM AEST
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I see you were good at expressing yourself even in your early ypdc days: ) I like how you don't know what's coming, but you're still at ease with it. Nice job!
Scorp.
(Who has to admit, she isn't a fan of the capital letters throughout though! tsk tsk!) ; ) |
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