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Madman Waters
Contributed by
secretwind
on
Sunday, 30th November 2003 @ 09:29:03 PM in AEST
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oops
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across the madman waters
i cast shadows
watching creatures
that i've come to know
as i dangerously drift to the cliffs
of your malice,
there is non fiction
in every thing you say
encounters
leave me in a daze
as i listen i see visions
and reality is ignored.
I get this creepy feeling
that when you smile
there is something you are concealing
a sudden gust of wind
a new storm hits with no warning
into the water i
fall.
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secretwind
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2003-11-30 21:29:03]
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Re: Madman Waters
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by sindi-selde on
Sunday, 30th November 2003 @ 09:35:48 PM AEST
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Oooh. This poem gives me shivers.
I know your smiling 'friend' -or someone like him- I can still see his smile...
I really like the way that you had the last word on its own line.
This poem describes someone I know perfectly.
That man scares me.
I only have one question...
Who? |
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Re: Madman Waters
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by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 7th December 2003 @ 12:24:23 AM AEST
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| vivid, real, a great poem that breathes:) hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: Madman Waters
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by emystar on
Monday, 26th January 2004 @ 08:26:29 AM AEST
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Wow!
Very creative, deep write.
great job.
hug, luv,
emy |
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