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Creature Inside
Contributed by
echomywurdz
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Sunday, 30th November 2003 @ 08:02:38 PM in AEST
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dieing again i feel the pain
the pain that hurts so badly i cant help but go insane
it starts inside of me deep within my heart
and then trys to get out of me by ripping me apart
i try to resist but i cant hold on
i sit in the corner all shook up thinkin how long can this go on
its taking my life that im not ready do give
all i want now is to be here and live
but i know this thing wont let me
it wants me gone so i sit here to think
and now its time to say so long
taking my few last breaths saying that one last word
and even though im dieing......
everyone still wants me to be heard......
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2003-11-30 20:02:38]
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Re: Creature Inside
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by lil_angel on
Friday, 19th December 2003 @ 08:55:28 AM AEST
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| this is a good write and ur right everyone does want to be heard and somepeople are "dying" to be heard. |
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Re: Creature Inside
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by Bizzy on
Friday, 19th December 2003 @ 04:37:48 PM AEST
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Hello there, echomywurdz! I like your nickname and that is a good poem and expression of your feelings. I say to you, "Just, write, write, write.!"
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