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black
Contributed by
blackteardrops
on
Sunday, 30th November 2003 @ 06:33:17 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Blackness. Dark. Empty. Lonely. Nothingness.
Slowly, I'm sinking into a mindless and seemingly pointless existence.
Why does this darkness exist?
Is it self inflicted by me?
Am I feeding on the emptiness around me?
Or is this something that has to happen?
The minutes tick slowly by.
The hours drag on.
One day melts into another.
It's all becoming a blur.
A blur of sensless, meaningless emotions.
I'm falling.
Falling into a world where one day is indistinguishable from the next.
Where life has little meaning.
"Is everything alright?"
No, Zach. If only you knew
Copyright ©
blackteardrops
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2003-11-30 18:33:17]
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Re: black
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by jkpunk13 on
Sunday, 30th November 2003 @ 06:35:22 PM AEST
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| ******* sick |
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Re: black
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by bobotheclown on
Sunday, 30th November 2003 @ 08:52:32 PM AEST
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I liked this very intense as if I was in the middle of yer thoughts. Could have done w/o the last two lines though. Hope to see more from you.
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Re: black
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by Misery_Sage on
Sunday, 7th December 2003 @ 04:39:31 PM AEST
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| You write well. I love it. Keep up the good work. |
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Re: black
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by saddarkgirlreingsthenight on
Thursday, 22nd January 2004 @ 07:37:00 PM AEST
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honey, u really need to chill, the poems r great but, u gotta tell people when they stress u out. really come on now. i can't lose my therapist.
WWP
SWK
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