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Darkness
Contributed by
LiveTheDream
on
Sunday, 30th November 2003 @ 12:51:31 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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A darkness to my soul has entered me
And theres nothing more i can do
I hold my hand and hope that someone will Come and release this pain from me
I know its impossible to live life fully without Regrets and doubts;
But sometimes i get so fed up and i begin to Reach into my hole-
A hole that gets so deep and has
Nowhere to go
Only depth for you to fall into;
A hiding place from the world
If you've even been into that hole you will find Something so black-
The heart of someone who cares and loves And only looks for love back
So i write these words in the hope that i can Release some black from that hole;
That pehaps i can get out of it
And hope for better things
People have always told me:
"That you can see things through, things will Turn out in the end you wont ever lose"
I only wish i could believe those words
And teach myself the truth
But right now all i want to do
Is reach into my hole;
And escape in the hoping
That someone will find me
And free me from this pain
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LiveTheDream
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2003-11-30 12:51:31]
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Re: Darkness
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 30th November 2003 @ 01:23:14 PM AEST
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| Excellent...the depths of your torment are clearly stated. A very relatable poem for me. |
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Re: Darkness
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by faffeee on
Sunday, 30th November 2003 @ 02:33:07 PM AEST
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| i agree totally ^^ your description is extremely truthful xx |
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