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Fear
Contributed by
PhantomVampyress
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Sunday, 30th November 2003 @ 10:54:40 AM in AEST
Topic:
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Surrender yourself
into the heart of your fears
They shall deliver themselves inside you,
take over your body, mind and spirit
Fear shall be your master and you a scared puppet on a string.
Afraid to move;
Afraid to move
JENNA
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2003-11-30 10:54:40]
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Re: Fear
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by SensitiveSoAbused on
Sunday, 30th November 2003 @ 12:07:55 PM AEST
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i like the repeating of afraid to move at the end, especially with the semi-colon use.
the puppet on a string bit, cliche. |
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Re: Fear
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by a_t0rtured_s0ul on
Thursday, 18th December 2003 @ 03:15:39 AM AEST
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it was a bit cliche, but she got the point across. i still liked it.
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