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Deal with it
Contributed by
PunkD
on
Sunday, 30th November 2003 @ 08:12:57 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Life would be so good if we could
All do over our mistakes…
Fix the bad things that happened to us…
Be happy and loved and cared for…
Not have to worry about things that people
Took for granted not so many years ago.
If life was simple and plain,
With no complications too big to handle.
Life would be so good if
We all could trust our neighbors…
We didn't have to fear strangers.
Life would be so good…
Wouldn't it?
But if life were that good,
We'd all be waiting to wake from the dream.
I guess we'll just have to face facts,
Life sucks. Deal with it.
Copyright ©
PunkD
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2003-11-30 08:12:57]
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Re: Deal with it
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by loopylou on
Sunday, 30th November 2003 @ 08:16:30 AM AEST
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| lol i loved this its the brutal truth.... |
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Re: Deal with it
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by Avarice_Riot on
Sunday, 30th November 2003 @ 08:35:02 AM AEST
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Too true...here's to wishing people would get the message...
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Re: Deal with it
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Monday, 1st December 2003 @ 05:46:37 AM AEST
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Good write!! You ought to get bored more often....
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