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The Choice You Made
Contributed by
TheVarsh
on
Sunday, 30th November 2003 @ 02:34:15 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Knowing 2 but loving one
afraid to give in completely
fearing their actions and yours
this is your choice
Living 2 lives
as a friend and as a lover
having to balance them both
this is your choice
Understanding is what draws you to him
he knows what you’ve been through
he’s felt your pain a million times before
this is why you chose him
Love is what draws you to the other
a feeling you can’t describe
kisses that stay long after
this is why you chose him
This is why you chose them
as friend and as mate
so don’t choose one or the other
just accept it as your fate
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TheVarsh
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2003-11-30 02:34:15]
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Re: The Choice You Made
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by EmSal on
Sunday, 30th November 2003 @ 02:36:55 AM AEST
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This was good :). Nice work.
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Re: The Choice You Made
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 30th November 2003 @ 07:04:17 AM AEST
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This was pretty good. I'll definitely keep an eye out for more of your work.
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Re: The Choice You Made
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by talisman on
Sunday, 30th November 2003 @ 02:04:04 PM AEST
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good work very honest also makes me think about what i
might do in the same situation
makes for a good debate, i love to argue!
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Re: The Choice You Made
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Tuesday, 2nd December 2003 @ 05:13:20 AM AEST
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Welcome to your-poetry.com... this is an interesting poem, to say the least.. I enjoyed reading it....love your point of view...
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