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The mind of a cat
Contributed by
scarykitten
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Saturday, 29th November 2003 @ 04:13:43 PM in AEST
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As my cat stares out the window i ask her one day
What is she thinking
She answers I am thinking of that mouse that got away
And how lonely he must be alone
And that she wants to go and climb a tree
That will be the last time i ask my cat what she is thinking
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Re: The mind of a cat
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by secretwind on
Saturday, 29th November 2003 @ 04:46:16 PM AEST
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I CAN RELATE TO THIS ONE,GOOD WRITE.
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Re: The mind of a cat
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by Daniela_Maria_Violin on
Saturday, 29th November 2003 @ 04:49:38 PM AEST
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cute... just a suggestion though...
it would have been better laid out like this:
As my cat stares out the window
I ask her one day what she is thinking
She answers....
"I am thinking of that mouse that got away and how lonely he must be....
I want to go climb a tree"
That will be THE LAST TIME
I ask my cat what she is thinking!!
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Re: The mind of a cat
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by a_t0rtured_s0ul on
Thursday, 18th December 2003 @ 03:22:03 AM AEST
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that sounds about like my cat haha, it was a good write. we all come up with stuff we don't like as much personally, but there's always people out here that will enjoy it. keep it up.
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