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Breaking the broken
Contributed by
Cobalt
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Saturday, 29th November 2003 @ 02:07:26 PM in AEST
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So strong yet somehow weak.
Always feel like some little child.
Caged and left alone with
Salty tears running down my face
Knowing full well of the weight.
Still made that same old choice.
Only way I knew how to be me.
So miserable with or without you.
On my knees I cry my last tear for us.
Rolling the dice and
letting the chips fall as they may.
Now finally with my heart back I walk away.
The book of the faulty phoenix.
Copyright ©
Cobalt
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2003-11-29 14:07:26]
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Re: Breaking the broken
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by Kie on
Saturday, 29th November 2003 @ 04:39:00 PM AEST
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Aww, so very sad
I loved the line--(so miserable)
That rings so very true.
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Re: Breaking the broken
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by loopylou on
Saturday, 29th November 2003 @ 05:05:01 PM AEST
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| aww...i feel your pain everybody has insecruities...and most over confident people are really false....let your heart tell you whats true |
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Re: Breaking the broken
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by Daniela_Maria_Violin on
Saturday, 29th November 2003 @ 05:31:45 PM AEST
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beautiful and sad...
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Re: Breaking the broken
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by CrystalSilence on
Saturday, 29th November 2003 @ 06:09:43 PM AEST
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We are stronger than WE realise ourselves to be,yet we are not as strong as others seem to think we are.
Cool write
so sad
CS |
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Re: Breaking the broken
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by EmSal on
Saturday, 29th November 2003 @ 11:31:49 PM AEST
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This was awesome Cobalt, spoke right to me, very loud, very clear. I loved it.
Emma. |
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Re: Breaking the broken
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by blueheart on
Sunday, 30th November 2003 @ 12:40:21 AM AEST
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| Really sad, very true. |
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Re: Breaking the broken
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by poetrygodslove on
Wednesday, 3rd December 2003 @ 10:16:14 PM AEST
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| takes a strong person pick themselves back up and try again...good write...sandy buy some more dice lol.... |
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