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Then (Than), tricky; Friends?
Contributed by
SensitiveSoAbused
on
Saturday, 29th November 2003 @ 02:07:11 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Then (Than), tricky; Friends?
Friendship is subjective,
and the subject of
being subjected to:
false, fleeting friendships,
are you.
and trust, a tricky thing –
you must be sure to think
before,
People, you want to open up to,
Girls, you want to open up for you
which is the main
distraction, destruction,
the pain;
this is always to be avoided,
or voided,
your friendships
may be,
You see
hurt you can’t be, when alone,
but a lone cold frozen form
needs companions to keep warm
SO…
If you’ve found you’ve hurt your friends,
approach them now and make amends,
(I’ll quit this poignant rhyming then.)
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SensitiveSoAbused
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2003-11-29 14:07:11]
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Re: Then (Than), tricky; Friends?
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by Cobalt on
Saturday, 29th November 2003 @ 02:09:25 PM AEST
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| This was an interesting write but I liked it and the message. |
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Re: Then (Than), tricky; Friends?
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by scarykitten on
Saturday, 29th November 2003 @ 02:51:17 PM AEST
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| This poem reminds me when my mom said that you would be lucky if you could find that one true friend befor you die |
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Re: Then (Than), tricky; Friends?
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by loopylou on
Saturday, 29th November 2003 @ 05:08:17 PM AEST
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| i think i only have to true friends in this world....your words are so scarry you almost sound as if your threatning me.....very strong and powerful.....i like it.....well done |
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Re: Then (Than), tricky; Friends?
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by EmSal on
Saturday, 29th November 2003 @ 11:37:33 PM AEST
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You find out who your true friends are soon enough don't you. I have lost many friends, whom I thought were true...But pleased to say that I have two true friends that I trust with my whole heart and would never wanna hurt them. Distance (Moving away) shouldn't end the friendship either...good write, I love the message because I have been hurt by supposedly my friends and they never made amends...but thanks for sharing this. All the best.
Emma. |
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