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The Council
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ronald
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Saturday, 29th November 2003 @ 12:09:34 PM in AEST
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What is the truth?
What are the lies?
Am I still needed?
Or am I dispensable?
Where can my trust lie?
Or does it have nowhere?
And where is the mercy?
Or is it all gone?
And tell me,
Am I the next,
On the chopping block?
I no longer feel secure,
In this game of deception,
Where lies are everywhere,
Blurring our foresights,
Shutting out the lights,
Not knowing the road ahead,
Groping in the dark...
So...
Answer me,
Can our plan work out?
Can it make our golden chance?
Or will our flames die out,
Later in this game, at the council?
Can we make it all the way?
Or have they known our secrets,
Our alliance to usher us both,
To the threshold of victory?
What is our position?
Will our names appear,
On that dreadful face,
Of that paper?
Are we the next to go,
Because of a new plan,
That has been hatched?
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And here is the time again,
The time the council begins,
Hold my hand,
Fear is gripping my soul
I do not have any immunity,
Against my enemies...
One...
Two...
Three...
Four...
And here is my goodbye...
It is all over...
For us...
For you...
See you later...
Copyright ©
ronald
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2003-11-29 12:09:34]
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Re: The Council
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by norticus on
Saturday, 29th November 2003 @ 12:20:58 PM AEST
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3.1 on the Nortiscale
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Re: The Council
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by blueheart on
Sunday, 30th November 2003 @ 12:43:00 AM AEST
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| Very nice. I loved the way you repeated the questions. Good job, Ronald. |
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Re: The Council
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by Avarice_Riot on
Sunday, 30th November 2003 @ 04:43:08 AM AEST
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| Finally....I always enjoy reading your stuff. I've only seen the 1st Survivor ('cos I wanted to see what they'd think of our countrylah...), Marquesas and Africa.....the standard's kinda gone down since the first one.....but still, this is very well-written, you've described the situation accurately. Kudos, I say. |
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Re: The Council
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by Qohinoor on
Saturday, 17th January 2004 @ 11:22:31 AM AEST
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| Face it, "reality" isn't what it's all cracked up to be, ronnie. Great criticism. |
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