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Carbon copy
Contributed by
broken-glass
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Saturday, 29th November 2003 @ 04:59:02 AM in AEST
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I really feel that no one can control me.
I really feel that no one knows me.
I really feel that no one owns me.
I really feel that no one owes me.
So where I used to be.......I'll never be again,
because I've been there now,
and I'm worth more than that.............
hey!
I really feel they can't kowtow me.
I really feel they can't enlist me.
I really think I will not join them.
I really feel they can't conform me.
So where I was falling, I will now be flying.
And now the truth is out,
they will not conform me,
now they see I don't just want to be a clone,
how I choose to choose my own path...
now they know I'm not just a carbon copy.....
a carbon copy.
I really think they won't ignore me,
I hope they know I do not owe them.........
anything..........
car-bon clone.
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Re: Carbon copy
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by ArdRi79 on
Saturday, 29th November 2003 @ 06:12:43 AM AEST
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I appreciate the sentiment :)
it does read more like a song then a poem though. |
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Re: Carbon copy
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by norm on
Saturday, 29th November 2003 @ 05:05:31 PM AEST
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Well thought out and a nicely constructed poem
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If I followed the dictates of the thoughts,
I would have to leave planet earth,
But leaving earth is not so easy,
I'd have to compromise with mirth...
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Re: Carbon copy
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by Wrybod on
Sunday, 30th November 2003 @ 06:20:46 AM AEST
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Yor poem tends to make me assume that you do not have a wife and family.
There are no clones
we are all different
treading our own path
in one way that makes all the same
Everybody goes through life with feelings like your poem at some time or other.
A very interesting poem, excellent, thought provoking poem, certainly made me think but the more I did, the more I realised the beauty of DNA. which automatically gives us exactly what you want.
You've had it from your conception
bob
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Re: Carbon copy
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by bobotheclown on
Tuesday, 2nd December 2003 @ 03:53:09 PM AEST
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I like this because its the truth I get knocked on constantly for being somewhat different and I am glad you refuse to conform as well.
Bobo (Joel) |
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