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O yes, you're in my heart!
Contributed by
venkat
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Saturday, 29th November 2003 @ 01:32:37 AM in AEST
Topic:
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O beautiful Mother of heaven! Dear Goddess!
Those who meditate on Thee as the Goddess
With luster of the full moon in autumn, who art
Holding thy two hands in the pose of granting
Boons and offering protection and also sporting
In the other two, a book and a rosary of crystals
Can become poets of the great classical works
With torrents of words excelling even honey,
Milk and grapes, flown from their lips of poesy!
Those who meditate on thee in association with
Vasini and allied deities who are all sources of
Speech and whose radiance resembles the luster
Of moon stone, can become authors of the works
Of poetry which are as delightful as the embrace
Of the goddess of love and sweet with fragrance
Of the mouth of the youthful goddess of learning
O Mother! May every thing that I do with sense
Of self dedication be the items in thy service-
My prattle, thy prayer; movements of my hands,
Thy worship; my walking, Thy circumambulation;
My eating, a fire sacrifice to Thee; the stretching
Of my body in sleep and rest, prostration to Thee;
And all my enjoyments, offerings made to Thee!
O Mother, obeisance to Thee, who art ever existent
As truth and light in the mystic lotus of my heart!
29-11-2003
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Re: O yes, you're in my heart!
(User Rating: 1 ) by kalika_vidya on
Saturday, 29th November 2003 @ 02:04:45 AM AEST (User
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I am the first one to comment..sweet and sensuous..wonderful read..very beautifully written. with love..K |
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Re: O yes, you're in my heart!
(User Rating: 1 ) by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Saturday, 29th November 2003 @ 02:29:01 AM AEST (User
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You write these so well....
Jenni |
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Re: O yes, you're in my heart!
(User Rating: 0 ) by Former_Member on
Saturday, 29th November 2003 @ 04:02:45 AM AEST (User
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Again a beautiful poem on divine mother sweet with fragrance Of the mouth of the goddess of learning...and it is our
"Soundharya Lahari" a good work. Snigdha.
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Re: O yes, you're in my heart!
(User Rating: 1 ) by Ilhar on
Saturday, 29th November 2003 @ 07:23:55 AM AEST (User
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very uplifting...wonderful
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Re: O yes, you're in my heart!
(User Rating: 1 ) by Cobalt on
Saturday, 29th November 2003 @ 01:56:38 PM AEST (User
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I love how you used the words. This was pretty good man. I got a small chuckle out of some of it but not in a bad way. Just this line I just liked how it was written 'Can become poets of the great classical works
With torrents of words excelling even honey,
Milk and grapes, flown from their lips of poesy!'
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Re: O yes, you're in my heart!
(User Rating: 1 ) by chandramohan on
Monday, 1st December 2003 @ 05:56:07 AM AEST (User
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a wonderful presentation on the goddess of learning and poetry.
thanks to venkat. |
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Re: O yes, you're in my heart!
(User Rating: 1 ) by chandramohan on
Monday, 1st December 2003 @ 05:56:18 AM AEST (User
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a wonderful presentation on the goddess of learning and poetry.
thanks to venkat. |
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Re: O yes, you're in my heart!
(User Rating: 1 ) by Wrybod on
Friday, 5th December 2003 @ 02:43:41 AM AEST (User
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So that's where it comes from. Such richness of phrase and completeness of giving.
bob |
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Re: O yes, you're in my heart!
(User Rating: 1 ) by emystar on
Tuesday, 9th December 2003 @ 06:07:32 AM AEST (User
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I agree very good and beautifull write full with meaning.
Keep up the great work.
huggs, luv,
emy |
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Re: O yes, you're in my heart!
(User Rating: 1 ) by PhantomVampyress on
Friday, 12th December 2003 @ 03:39:12 AM AEST (User
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a beautiful write
peace joy and hope
JENNA |
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