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Tempted
Contributed by
crystalsilence
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Friday, 28th November 2003 @ 10:43:12 PM in AEST
Topic:
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If you really knew me
I wonder what you'd say
Im tempted just to let you know
That it is "me" here today
You pass me by where once before
Your words would find their place
Now you walk and not look back
You've left an empty space
Seems so very silent
Lonely,I must say
Im tempted just to let you know
That it is "me" here today
But really I am happy
It has shown me real from fake
Your time I will not have
And mine,you will not take
Copyright ©
crystalsilence
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2003-11-28 22:43:12]
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Re: Tempted
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by EmSal on
Friday, 28th November 2003 @ 11:32:13 PM AEST
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Wow this was good.
All the best with everything.
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Re: Tempted
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 29th November 2003 @ 12:06:01 AM AEST
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| well said.....and I dare ya ;o) |
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Re: Tempted
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by humphdj on
Saturday, 29th November 2003 @ 07:05:36 AM AEST
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I liked this
Good write
Rgds
Humphdj
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