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The Last Rose
Contributed by
MisterRight
on
Tuesday, 27th August 2002 @ 06:40:45 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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There is a place
The last rose grows
Where it is
One soul knows
In fields of darkness
It stands alone
Blacks and grays
No sunlight shown
~The rose sings~
~“I love you.”~
Thick dark clouds
Fill the sky
Cold wind blows
No caring eye
Surrounded by
Pain and sorrow
Only hope
A better tomorrow
~As the rose says~
~“I love you.”~
Bright red petals
Wilted and torn
Slowly dies
No one to morn
This is the last rose
Barely alive
Struggles through solitude
Trying to survive
~And the rose bellows~
~“I love you.”~
Ridged mountains
Barren lands
Hidden away
The last rose stands
Hurt and ache
On all sides
This is where
True love hides
~The rose whispers~
~“I love you.”~
Constant winter
Raging storms
Protected by
Only it’s thorns
Prison of darkness
Love stands alone
Will to endure
Lets out a moan
~As the rose utters~
~“I love you.”~
This the last rose
Grim is its fate
Alone in gloom
It sits in wait
Waiting solemnly
Pain that surrounds
Waiting to be picked
One knows where it’s found
~And the rose cries~
~“I love you.”~
Tormented by memories
Hoping you’ll hear
This, the last rose
Love sheds a tear
Living for hope
Lonely abyss
Waiting for death
The final kiss
~The rose sighs~
~“I love you”~
Only one knows
Where it’s found
Brightness of love
Darkness surrounds
Luminous beauty
Fading light goes
Encompassed by suffering
It is the last rose
~As the rose breathes~
~“I love you”~
Somber setting
Constant night
Loneliness prevails
The roses plight
Dim world confines
No footprints near
Solitary cell
True love in fear
~And the rose thinks~
~“I love you”~
Overwhelmed by anguish
This is the last rose
One soul only
Knows where it grows
Engulfed in conflict
True love sits
Eternity of waiting
To be picked
~The rose dreams~
~“I love you”~
Endlessly awaiting
The one who knows
As I scream, “I love you.”
I am the last rose
Copyright ©
MisterRight
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2002-08-27 06:40:45]
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Re: The Last Rose
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by XoIrishXo on
Wednesday, 28th August 2002 @ 10:26:15 AM AEST
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Wow....Curtis, this one is beautiful!! Very sad and lonely...and desperate. Hang in there kiddo...it will get easier, I promise!!
Love,
Col |
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Re: The Last Rose
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by princesspurty on
Friday, 30th August 2002 @ 07:04:11 AM AEST
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| very well wrote, so sad, great job! |
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Re: The Last Rose
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by Chrissie on
Friday, 30th August 2002 @ 08:38:03 AM AEST
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This is breathtaking Curtis ..I'm only sorry I haven't seen it before. I can understand why it is one of your favourites.....some very vivid images here...beautiful.
Chrissie :) |
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Re: The Last Rose
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by MnMnMsrcool on
Friday, 30th August 2002 @ 11:51:47 AM AEST
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| that was a very beautiful poem! very well written! Keep writing |
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Re: The Last Rose
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by Clarity on
Monday, 2nd September 2002 @ 11:02:34 PM AEST
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this is so beautiful...smile curtis, things will get better :-)
luv,
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Re: The Last Rose
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by cryingonmyporch on
Saturday, 21st September 2002 @ 12:54:15 AM AEST
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outstanding! It left me speechless. There are no words to express the feeling I got when I read your poems.
Amy |
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