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Something called to me
Contributed by
echomywurdz
on
Friday, 28th November 2003 @ 10:20:29 PM in AEST
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Something called to me
it told me how things would be
it told me what to do
but it didnt tell me how you would truely feel
Something called to me
it told me everything would be fine
it told me to cut
it told me you wouldnt mind
Something called to me
it told me its okay
it told me to stab myself,
it said to go away
Something called to me
it told me i am dead
it told me that you did this
it told me you were messed in the head
Something called to me
but by then it was far to late
told me that you had gona to far
and were already gone on your suicide date
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echomywurdz
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2003-11-28 22:20:29]
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Re: Something called to me
(User Rating: 1 )
by EmSal on
Friday, 28th November 2003 @ 11:07:54 PM AEST
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Oh dear this is not good...I mean the write is good obviously...but the subject, the theme...ouch it has a painful. sad, confusing, hurtful feel to it. I hope that all will be well soon for you. Take care.
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Re: Something called to me
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by Wrybod on
Sunday, 30th November 2003 @ 08:12:14 PM AEST
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I think I'm taken for a ride
by all this talk of suicide
a lot complain this darker side
does not improve our eventide
so why not keep these thoughts inside
No offence is here implied
I hope your life is not denide
and you eschew the death implied
to live the life and take a pride
in all that nature doth provide
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Re: Something called to me
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by Wrybod on
Sunday, 30th November 2003 @ 08:13:09 PM AEST
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I think I'm taken for a ride
by all this talk of suicide
a lot complain this darker side
does not improve our eventide
so why not keep these thoughts inside
No offence is here implied
I hope your life is not denide
and you eschew the death implied
to live the life and take a pride
in all that nature doth provide
bob(ide) |
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