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Beautiful
Contributed by
crystalsilence
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Friday, 28th November 2003 @ 09:51:43 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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In the swirls of my reflection,where the soul can tell no lies
I search the faith I have in you,looking deep into my eyes
Tender words they echo,coursing through my mind
The voice of one who tells me,that I am beautiful,all the time
Cool waters run,I immerse my hands,cup the water to my face
Refreshing to my senses,on sweltering summer days
To the mirror once again,I cast my searching eyes
And smile for the moments,that you have me mesmerized
Trickles upon my cheeks,the water holds me fast
I watch as every drop falls down,right up until the last
Transparent in the sunlight,that spins about the afternoon
They came ,they played and held me
Then left again too soon
So I cast another glance to the mirror of my soul
It's then I see the beauty,of a love thats pure and whole
Within me theres a force,that radiates the glow
Its you my darling ~kang'i~,your love, as beauty ,shows
For everywhere inside,you have roamed and touched with gold
Strokes upon my face at night,as whispers there unfold
Deep into my heart,you have embedded lasting warmth
You've caressed me with your tenderness,my shelter from the storm
You're the essence of a rainbow,you colour all my days
And when the blues are callling,you chase them all away
With love,you say I'm beautiful,and yes you have me believe
But it is you my darling kang'i that dares my soul to breathe
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crystalsilence
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2003-11-28 21:51:43]
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Re: Beautiful
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by Jackee_line on
Friday, 28th November 2003 @ 10:28:16 PM AEST
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WOW!!! this is so beautiful, an excellent write.
Bravo. |
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Re: Beautiful
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by doug on
Friday, 28th November 2003 @ 10:35:24 PM AEST
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| this was a great poem, keep it up your friend doug |
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Re: Beautiful
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 29th November 2003 @ 12:00:13 AM AEST
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| Such love in this. It literally brought tears to my eyes. :o( In my heart I am truly happy you have found your soul mate. |
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Re: Beautiful
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by MoonlitAngel on
Saturday, 29th November 2003 @ 05:42:34 AM AEST
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This is truly exceptional. The description, the wording, everything. It's unlike any love poem I've ever read. I'm in awe!! So please, keep 'em coming!!!
~ Moonlit |
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