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Fading Stars
Contributed by
sugar0986
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Friday, 28th November 2003 @ 09:48:15 PM in AEST
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The Sky Has never looked so blue,
as it does tonight.
The stars are slowly fading,
leaving me not even on wish,
to mend my heart.
My heart misled me,
and it hurts extremly.
Leaving me with no tears to cry.
My feelings are slowly fading.
Leaving me alone,
stranded in a small dark corner,
to strive on my on.
My mind is telling me one thing,
but my heart is telling me another.
It's tearing me apart.
As I slowly lose my insanity.
So I pull the trigger,
and say goodbye.
Copyright ©
sugar0986
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2003-11-28 21:48:15]
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Re: Fading Stars
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by doug on
Friday, 28th November 2003 @ 10:37:20 PM AEST
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| this is very sad and i hope you feel better soon. great poem your friend doug |
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Re: Fading Stars
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by EmSal on
Friday, 28th November 2003 @ 11:04:59 PM AEST
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Ohhh I could relate to what you are saying up until that last line, which I do wish that I could die sometimes but then other times I don't. But a very sad write, although a good one, but sad to know this is how you feel. Take care okay.
Emma. |
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