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Overheated

Contributed by daniel on Tuesday, 27th August 2002 @ 06:34:56 AM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

you take ear and ear to words you don't comprehend.
it sounds so catchy it's something you can recommend.
what point is it to counterfeit on what you feel?
there's nothing more no nothing more no nothing to do...

take note, man on the page and
grovel in, ounce of rage man
understand that you don't understand
so check the pressure gauge...
take note of the man on the page.
grovel in with an ounce of a rage.
don't understand so you kick out a jam
and check the pressure gauge.

just look the part and substantiate a place in line.
so long as we know your presence you think that you'll be fine.
what value is gained in shallow pains that you deal?
there's something more oh something more oh something true...

take sight, man on the stage and
break down, light of the caged man
there's no appeal in what isn't real
so check the pressure gauge...
take sight of the man on the stage.
crumble down in light of his cage.
it draws an appeal but it isn't real
in red of the pressure gauge.

why'd you come this way? your coolant fell from you.
oh why'd you come today? your coolant fell far away...

run smooth like clockwork you do so well.
perhaps you're machined i can never tell.
the look in your soul is depleted.
even contraptions get overheated.
move refined engaged in vein of things.
dabbled whatever seeing what it brings.
empty lack of feeling runs repeated.
oh even gadgets get overheated.

why'd you come this way? your coolant fell from you.
oh why'd you come today? your coolant fell far away...

***
(8/26/02)

Copyright © daniel ... [ 2002-08-27 06:34:56]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Overheated (User Rating: 1 )
by Daniela_Maria_Violin on Friday, 30th August 2002 @ 06:09:31 AM AEST
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HEY DANNY!

yeah...I'm back!... awesome write you got here even though it was pretty angry... I especially liked the last two lines... =:)

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