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Love
Contributed by
Breezer08
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Friday, 28th November 2003 @ 05:57:25 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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I will love you for all time.
Please tell me now, is that a crime?
The lose of your love is driving me insane
Will this hurt be in vain?
So many things I could have improved.
Could I have improved my love for you?
Probably yes, if my love was pure.
Was I really in love with you for sure?
yes, I was in love with you for real.
But was it love, this thing I could feel?
Of course it was! What else would it be?
I just wish you would feel that way for me.
So many questions I don't understand.
For your love I don't demand.
I only WISH for your love again.
Because for me, your the only man.
Copyright ©
Breezer08
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2003-11-28 17:57:25]
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Re: Love
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by Kie on
Friday, 28th November 2003 @ 07:24:08 PM AEST
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I enjoyed this poem & the story found within it.
You did well, congrats.
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Re: Love
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by EmSal on
Friday, 28th November 2003 @ 11:18:39 PM AEST
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Lovely write...I know I've felt this way. Thanks for sharing.
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