|
 Menu
|
|
|
|
|
Social
|
|
|
|
|
saving you from you
Contributed by
loopylou
on
Friday, 28th November 2003 @ 02:50:56 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
|
darkness falls all a round
i hear the soft husstle of leaves on the ground
i tried to save you once
but i relised you were lost
and your never know how hard and high i streched
beyond my very best
but your petentail was already wasted
you had already bled
im so sorry dear friend
as i hear your foot steps behind me
i turn around
i feel blinded by your poverty
but you flew away
when i held out my hand for you to hold
you refused to change
but i didnt think you would but you were worth a chance
i could of saved you along time ago
now its to late
im sorry your just a victim of so cruel fate
Copyright ©
loopylou
... [
2003-11-28 14:50:56]
(Date/Time posted on
site)
Advertisments:
|
|
|
|
|
|
Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more
|
|
All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry
Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any
comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please
contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title
etc.
|
|
|
Re: saving you from you
(User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on
Friday, 28th November 2003 @ 03:50:18 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| very gentle loving caring poem, all we can ever do is be there with a hug and a smile, right? hugs n' love nessa |
|
|
Re: saving you from you
(User Rating: 1 )
by Kie on
Friday, 28th November 2003 @ 07:34:17 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
A very moving poem, sure to bring tears.
I enjoyed reading it.
Kie
|
|
|
Re: saving you from you
(User Rating: 1 )
by EmSal on
Friday, 28th November 2003 @ 11:22:36 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
Why is it when we need someone no one comes and when we feel as if we can do it on our own or we just don't want anyone helping people want to help. Such a beautiful write for this friend of yours...you did your best to reach out, up to them now... I really liked this write thanks for sharing it. All the best.
Emma. |
|
|
Re: saving you from you
(User Rating: 1 )
by juliette on
Sunday, 30th November 2003 @ 06:49:34 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
I know you have heard this a million times, but you can't change anybody sunshine they have to do it themselves.But I sure enough tried it a couple of times and ended with only a broken heart in the palm of my hands. Move on to somebody who doesn't need to change, someone you love just the way they are!
juliette |
|
|
|
· 
Poetry
Community
Members
Areas
Reference
Search
Top
Others
